Repainted Howleen

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Howleen was repainted by me

I did this repainting some weeks ago, but I was more excited about the BJD makeup so I wanted to submit those photos before.
This is Howleen Wolf (little sister of Clawdeen and Clawd Wolf)
this one have some improvements, so in a way is best than the other ones but still I'm not sure if I like it, because I had an accident with one of her cheeks...
so here's my critique:
I put excesive and too much dark blushing, and not in the same cheek area
her freckles are too dark and makes she looks sick
I used too much sealant on her and the face looks dirty and lumpy

the onlt thing I like about it are the eyes, still not symetric at all but I see a big improvement on them, at last I drew them with only the pencils and not the brushes, and it was all thanks to the multiple tips
I prefer to paint BJDs, but I want to do it good with MHs too, now it's something personal

feel free to critique to help me get better, but please be respectful with my work! I put a lot of time and effort on this

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