Repainting VS Factory Makeup: Abbey Bominable II

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Abbey was repainted by me

Left: my original repaint work on an Abbey MH
Right: the factory makeup that Abbey come with

I repainted Abbey again, and she have a more sexy and maybe agressive look now. I really love the eyebrows, the eyes are pasable althrough I really love the iris, but I hate the blushing T_T it came out too dark, that happens to me because I didn't clean the brush good enough after using black pastels last time... also I see her face a bit dirty >< yes I know, her eyelashes suck T_T
*sigh* but at least I feel I'm improving at some little things. BTW here's the ice star it was hard to draw, but I love it
but I'll keep trying people, no matter how many things I still need to improve, I want to be good at this and I'm working hard to be

feel free to critique to help me get better, but please be respectful with my work! I put a lot of time and effort on this

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